Monday, 21 November 2011

Pitch Proposal

Knife Crime: The Image
Tim Oates




Format: Documentary 

Duration - 1 x 40mins

Format: One off documentary 

Premise: A documentary following the activities of a group of London, Southampton and Glaswegian youths. Following the everyday activities of gangs.

Contents: A shocking to the bone documentary. Up close and personal track of the lives of youths in inner city estates. Following their day to day activities, talking to them and having them explain what life is really like growing up on the streets. No glamour, no encouragement just a genuine account of the lives of the people in these situations and how they deal with them emotionally and practically.

Structure: A brief introduction on knife crime in the UK, presentation of statistics graphically. Introduction and brief outline of the people we will be following. 3 groups across the above mentioned cities. Then moving into a fly-on-the-wall tracking of the groups with narration over the top. Interviews will also be involved. 


















3 Part Drama.

Format: Docu-drama

Duration: 3 x 30 mins

Premise: A short drama presenting the effects of a son lost through a knife attack. Beginning at the funeral following through to the beginning of the court case,

Contents: The show will demonstrate the pressures of main stream media in families directly affected by knife crime. We plan to have it emotionally raw and have the family reactions based on real life research of people in situations similar to the one we are addressing. The victim will be a father, the breadwinner of the family.

Structure: The show will be shot as a drama with mid and long shots but the docu sense will come through interviews with the characters either singularly or as a couple. Discussing feelings towards the situation, their loss and their feelings towards the person who is to blame for all this. There will be a media fan fair gathering outside the house due to the particularly savage nature of the attack. 

An article regarding my childrens drams


What parents need to know

Parents need to know that this series now runs in syndication, so what was once the story of a young boy in junior high has in later seasons become about a young man in college. Consequently, later seasons deal with more adult issues, including sex, partying, a childhood crush that blossoms into adult love, and a best friend who comes from an unstable home life. Family relationships remain in the forefront, with parents questioning and supporting at all the necessary moments. Both tweens and teens can gain insight from the realistic issues.

Positive messages: Cory consistently seeks advice from his parents and teacher/neighbor.
Violence: Not applicable.
Sex: As Cory and Topanga's relationship continues, sexual discussions take place, but still in a family-friendly format.
Language: Not applicable.
Consumerism: Not applicable.
Drinking, drugs, & smoking: Not applicable.

Thursday, 17 November 2011

Interview Techniques

How important is having a good interview ?

  • gain new contacts 
  • mat get a job/work experience 
  • become recommended to others
  • What types of interview are there ? 


  • Magazine - Empire, film
  • Formal
  • Informal - no suit, getting to know basis
  • investigative, promotional 

Do's & Dont's :


  • Do dress appropriately 
  • do be wonderfully polite
  • do smell nice
  • do be confident
  • dont be obtuse 
  • dont make excuses 
  • dont frown or stare 
  • dont be late 
  • do use manners
  • do focus on your positives 
  • do be prepared
  • do have questions 

Monday, 14 November 2011

Script writing - Knife crime Stereotypes

http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-1036833/Over-half-young-knife-suspects-black-Scotland-Yard-figures-reveal.html

Script writing - Knife crime Statistics



This numbers table was taken from a government subsidery website clearly presenting the exact figures of knife crime from 1995 to 2008. It shows that the amount of crimes involving knives have sharply fell in the decade and a bit that the numbers cover. Appart from common assault which seems to fluctuate from year to year quite a large ammount. This information is useful for someone writing a documentary about knife crime because it shows clearly, while 1 incident of knife crime is to much, the numbers are getting better and that it is on the decline.

http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-1036833/Over-half-young-knife-suspects-black-Scotland-Yard-figures-reveal.html

This article is from the (racist) daily mail proclaiming that over half of knife crime is committed by black people. This article would show a writer that even though we live in 2012 there are still media publications that are prepared to try and drum up fear and create stereotypes on these numbers which with one quick look at the dates you can see that these numbers are from a 3 month period in a unnamed location and so is clearly not a fair study.

London knife crime 2010-11


Local authority
Total reported crime
Knife crimes
% of all crime
Barking & Dagenham19,149360.19
Barnet25,670310.12
Bexley13,75480.06
Brent29,433470.16
Bromley22,002230.1
Camden34,168260.08
Croydon32,228670.21
Ealing34,973540.15
Enfield23,612470.2
Greenwich24,108400.17
Hackney27,999680.24
Hammersmith & Fulham24,147340.14
Haringey24,584760.31
Harrow14,956250.17
Havering17,575290.17
Hillingdon23,738190.08
Hounslow23,855240.1
Islington28,079640.23
Kensington & Chelsea21,136160.08
Kingston upon Thames11,144110.1
Lambeth35,636930.26
Lewisham28,864600.21
Merton14,716270.18
Newham34,338740.22
Redbridge24,486270.11
Richmond Upon Thames11,72790.08
Southwark36,196780.22
Sutton12,416280.23
Tower Hamlets28,579380.13
Waltham Forest27,525370.13
Wandsworth24,713370.15
Westminster63,934390.06

This chart shows that knife crime in London inst even nearly as bad as it is portrayed to be within the media. In not one borough of London did knife crime contribute to even 0.5% of all crime committed in those particular borough's. Again proving to the anyone analyzing this data that knife crime is being blown hugely out of proportion.

http://www.direct.gov.uk/en/youngpeople/crimeandjustice/typesofcrime/dg_172800

This article hosted on the government website is a much more useful article that clearly explains the laws with knives. Instead of drumming up fear that every man woman and child on the streets of England are carrying knives perhaps our esteemed national publications could educate the population such as this article does.

http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/uk/7421534.stm

This article has a slightly more realistic opinion on kinfe crime and is a lot less biased that the previous examples. It is a little fairer and level headed and actually seems to be a sensible approach towards the topic of knife crime with out blowing it way out of proportion.

Review

Ellington supporting Short Stack @ the Hi-Fi
5th July 2009
As we briskly walked up Swanston Street trying to find Hi-Fi bar we were greeted by an onslaught of teenage girls and the odd boy, dotted proportionately considering the circumstances: the final local show of Short Stack’s current national tour, accompanied by My Future Lies and our interview subjects Ellington. As we entered the spacious venue of the Hi-Fi’s bandroom, we passed by the noisy 600 strong sell-out crowd.
Five minutes after getting set up we bumped into Jake Bosci, lead vocals of Ellington. After rounding up other band members Michael, Stevie and Lloyd, who were largely scattered around the venue, the interview was underway:
Tim: Hey guys, so to start off I’ve always been intrigued, why the name “Ellington” ?
Ellington: 
Ermm well it wasn’t really linked to Duke Ellington at all, it’s a lot less in depth than that. It was actually one of our original band member’s friend’s street address. Ellington Street. And that’s about it.
T: You all live together I’m led to believe. How is this? Does it cause any unwanted conflict within the band?
E: We don’t really live together all the time just some of the time, but really it’s ok. We give each other our own space and we’re all pretty relaxed dudes so it doesn’t really amount to anything. It’s usually pretty good.
T: Ah, sweet. So, would you say MySpace significantly helped you to your level of success?
E: Yeah definitely it’s pretty much the biggest outlet and really the only way fans can access our music. But Jake’s broke his iPhone so he’s socially defunct and can’t access any of it. We are really into all the ways we can stay in contact with our fans, we used to have a number you could SMS and we’d reply to it. We loved that but it drowned in a stream in Adelaide so we were spewing.
T: When you travelled to America to work on your EP “More Like A Movie, Less Like Real Life” with producer Matt Malpass, how was it? Did you find it somewhat overwhelming and daunting, and to a certain extent an unexpected pressure to be given such executive treatment on your second EP?
E: The main thing was that we had never professionally made an album before, our previous one was home recorded. So when we got there we realised we really had to step our game up. It was sick working with some of the other artists and it wasn’t as bad as we envisaged, they’re really just chilled dudes like us so it was cool to hang out and make music.
T: Obviously you all have friends and other lives, does touring, working relentlessly on albums and your music take you away from the “average” life? If so do you resent this?
E: Yeah it’s really hard; no matter what you’re doing your mind is always on this, but in a way it filters out and all the crap. You know, it shows you the people that really care and are willing to make the effort so in a way that’s good I guess. And we really just formed a tight knit group so on the whole it’s hard but it’s worth it. Also, Jake lives about 600km from Brisbane and from the rest of us and he still just picks up with all his old school friends. So although it’s tricky it’s not impossible.
T: 
Absolute Punk described you as a seemingly cuddly John Lennon; why do you think this is?
E: I think he was just name dropping really, I’d take it as our music is similar to his peace and love music but not to the extremities AP described it as.
T: Were you jealous Short Stack got the Rove spot? Is it hard to not be envious when that sort of thing happens?
E: They’ve taken all the right steps through MySpace and YouTube and now they’re getting the fame they deserve through their work. We don’t tend to get jealous unless it’s a really sweet spot. We still get shit spots and struggle to get good ones but obviously we’re still trying to expand and get bigger and more consistent tours.
T: And finally, anything you’d like to plug? What’s in Ellington’s future?
E: Just taking some time off to finish the album and pick the songs, we’ve got about 30 songs to trim down to album length, then another tour around Australia, before relocating to America when the album’s finished.
T: Sweet, thanks guys.
After a fantastic interview from the Ellington boys we located ourselves upstairs above the crowd and hung with For Our Hero and waited for the show to begin. Hi-Fi was a fantastic venue; we were looked after beautifully and given everything we needed. The layout of the room provided the prefect concert experience and it was an honour to be given the chance to work there.
The Ellington set kicked off fantastically and was met by a rabble of screaming girls and flashes of relentless photography. Jake and Michael seemed to radiate energy and charisma that enveloped the crowd wonderfully. Jakes vocals were soft and ethereal but to add to that, his voice was fragranced with some remarkable backing vocals from Michael (Who didn’t even wear shoes! Hippy, but what a lovely hippy he was). Jake, despite being under the weather, soaked up the attention and handled it fantastically. His illness didn’t show at all and he performed brilliantly. Between the four of them, Ellington put on a show worthy of entertaining the masses. I sat there in wonder as I realised how talented they are. They are wildly underappreciated, however stardom is surely only a waiting game for this Brisbane-based quartet.
Michael and Lloyd added movement to keep the girls screaming and added an aura of fun to the 5 song set. Between taking photos and making notes, I found my attention often drawn away from my set task. The show was so entertaining and everything about it was so well-practiced and put it to action you would never have guessed that they weren’t even allowed a sound check! This was madness in my opinion, as I’m sure the performance with adequate sound check would be simply unbelievable. That said, the sound and levels were perfectly set and all sound involved provided an inspiring ensemble. Everything was in time, including guitars, vocals and Stevie on drums. Stevie put in an admirable performance with his percussion perfectly timed and with the exact volume needed.
The end of the show finished with a perfect song “Between Faith and the City” that left the crowd clearly wanting more. And astoundingly it appeared from the cheers at the end that Short Stack weren’t even playing at all. They had simply slipped from everyone’s mind thanks to a dazzling Ellington performance!
J
Band Members
Jake Bosci – Vocals/Guitar
Michael Beatson – Guitar
Stevie West – Drums
Lloyd Budd – Bass